A day inside a dark clouded head 

 « … Why are you still laying on your bed?? Jesus Christ, can’t you even get some light in here!? No, you wouldn’t, it would expose you for what you really are. Unwanted, ugly, stupid, bum.. Why don’t you try getting out of here once in awhile?? Of course you wouldn’t, where would you go? With who would you hang out? All your friends can’t stand you anymore! You’re so useless and unsociable. Can’t you see that there are no future for you outside those walls?? Your hellish cage is also your haven, this is so pathetic, I can’t even pity you and no one does anymore. You wasted everybody’s patience, no one cares about you anymore. You crying? Do you hope that your tears will wash your insignificance and flaws away. What kind of sadist are you?? It’s so obvious, the world is waiting for you to die so it can get better. Why don’t you crash on a tree, jump from a bridge or bleed to death. You’d do all of us a favor… >>

And I kept crying, alone, I know it’s right but I’m too scared to act. 

#MiracleChallenge – Week 5 : 

Prompt no 4 (Write a Story / Poem using theme “Negative Thoughts”)


9 thoughts on “A day inside a dark clouded head 

  1. Miracle :) says:

    This kind of things happens with everybody who are just fed up of their own life. Talking to themselves. Mind voices. A to Z negative thoughts running inside the head, when we feel we are just unworthy. But, most of the times, it is we who think bad about ourselves and make judgement. If we think that we are great or we are nothing less than others, positive things starts happening.
    Like a piece on a wall, a day inside a dark clouded head.
    Brilliant use of prompt theme.
    Congrats for completing challenge no. 4 😃👏😃👏😃👏

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    • One Great Thinker says:

      Well your comment looked at a short story itself, it could have been used for the prompt, it’s nice, I enjoyed reading it. And concerning what you said, even good thoughts can be twisted, because the one who can do it -the brain- is sick to begin with.

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      • Miracle :) says:

        Thank you dear 😊
        But, it is all about mind. That is where all problems start to begin. When left alone, mind does crazy things. When we are busy, mind geta busy to what we say. Again, we need to choose what we want or need to do and think Which action of ours can make our soul happy. It’s all about our thinking. Downwards or upwards.
        Oops. Again a lengthy comment. Hope someone would benefit from here ☺

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  2. Miracle :) says:

    Reblogged this on miraclegirlblog and commented:
    Hello Everyone !

    Check out the latest post for ‘Weekly Writing #MiracleChallenge’ Week – 5 : https://miraclegirlblog.wordpress.com/2016/07/12/miraclechallenge-week-5-dated-12th-july-2016/

    Blogger : One Great Thinker (Laylah)

    Story Title : A Day Inside A Dark Clouded Head

    Challenge No : 4

    Challenge : Write a Short Story/Poem using Prompt Theme – NEGATIVE THOUGHTS

    For those who are new to #MiracleChallenge, every Tuesday morning, I post new Writing prompts for 5 challenges to write Short Story / Tiny Tale/ Poem / Haiku.

    Visit my blog or and know the latest writing prompts and the rules to participate in #MiracleChallenge for the week dated from 12th to 18th july, 2016. Yes ! 18th July is the deadline.

    Kindly, everyone read and inspire each other to write.

    Happy Blogging !

    Enjoy and have fun:)




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